Overall, you did a great job on the pitch. You developed a great hook for your pitch, as well as explaining the problem that you're trying to solve. I really like the marijuana idea, and I like the different benefits that you would be offering when you open up shop. The only thing I would've worked on a little bit was some of the pauses. The main pause I'm talking about is the one before the prices you gave. If you would shorten that pause a little bit, I feel that you'd have a much better flow to your pitch. However, you did an excellent job at creating a natural flow when you did the pitch.
I think this was a pretty good pitch! You got me hooked and hit me with facts. The opportunity is definitely there where the legalization of marijuana can be the start of a booming business, it is just investing in you and being prepared for when marijuana does become legalized. I agree with Austin, where you did do a couple of pauses within the pitch. So, you just need to practice a little more to get the flow going. I like the questions that you had in the end because it really makes the consumer question their stance in marijuana and whether or not it will become legalized.
This pitch was so different from the second one. I personally liked the enthusiasm you had in your second pitch. This pitch was more informative with he facts but you seemed doubtful of your own solution. You have a great idea stick to it be confident that your solution will work. Like I mentioned if you can't start here yet try starting it in other states.
Jacob, as you probably know yourself, the marijuana industry is extremely large and is only getting bigger with the legalization. This means you would be a pioneer in this business concept. Your delivery was good in explaining your purpose and structure, pointing out the benefits of it and asking good questions that make the listener think about the possibilities being presented.
Overall, you did a great job on the pitch. You developed a great hook for your pitch, as well as explaining the problem that you're trying to solve. I really like the marijuana idea, and I like the different benefits that you would be offering when you open up shop. The only thing I would've worked on a little bit was some of the pauses. The main pause I'm talking about is the one before the prices you gave. If you would shorten that pause a little bit, I feel that you'd have a much better flow to your pitch. However, you did an excellent job at creating a natural flow when you did the pitch.
ReplyDeleteI think this was a pretty good pitch! You got me hooked and hit me with facts. The opportunity is definitely there where the legalization of marijuana can be the start of a booming business, it is just investing in you and being prepared for when marijuana does become legalized. I agree with Austin, where you did do a couple of pauses within the pitch. So, you just need to practice a little more to get the flow going. I like the questions that you had in the end because it really makes the consumer question their stance in marijuana and whether or not it will become legalized.
ReplyDeleteThis pitch was so different from the second one. I personally liked the enthusiasm you had in your second pitch. This pitch was more informative with he facts but you seemed doubtful of your own solution. You have a great idea stick to it be confident that your solution will work. Like I mentioned if you can't start here yet try starting it in other states.
ReplyDeleteJacob, as you probably know yourself, the marijuana industry is extremely large and is only getting bigger with the legalization. This means you would be a pioneer in this business concept. Your delivery was good in explaining your purpose and structure, pointing out the benefits of it and asking good questions that make the listener think about the possibilities being presented.
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